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Camel
366 posts |
#186159 2008-05-20 21:37 GMT |
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please dont be too brutal. polite critics welcome. thank you.
http://poetry.com/Publications/display.asp?ID=W9641953&BN=999&PN=1 i deserve credit for trying. its dedicated to an old friend who passed away this month due to cancer. |
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Beachrunner
355 posts |
#186160 2008-05-20 21:53 GMT |
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It is very good, Bless you for thinking of your friend. So sorry for your loss. Thanks for sharing.
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Rob
370 posts |
#186161 2008-05-20 21:54 GMT |
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I love it.
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Autobot
378 posts |
#186162 2008-05-20 21:59 GMT |
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I enjoyed this poem. A very nice write. A nice dedication to a friend who sadly passed away.
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Style
347 posts |
#186163 2008-05-21 13:40 GMT |
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It was very good!! i liked it a lot
rated ya a 10 keep up the good work!! Sorry for your loss 
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