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    Guineapig

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    #186099   2008-05-21 10:08 GMT      
    *****
    Yes, Mr. Euwaite
    by TD Euwaite

    “What do you think of the new digital
    display, Mr. Euwaite?”

    I likes ‘em plenty good, Gov.

    “Have they made your life easier, Mr. Euwaite?”

    Aye, Sir, they has.

    “In what ways, Mr. Euwaite?”

    I kin’ writ pomes more quicker sometimes.

    “And how’s the new medication, Mr. Euwaite?”

    I is depressed none.

    “Very good. Now, back to work
    Mr. Euwaite.”

    *****

    VinyLover

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    #186100   2008-05-21 10:16 GMT      
    somewhat good but sometimes it take some time to think then write .

    GodThingie

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    #186101   2008-05-21 10:17 GMT      
    Singular, concise, a la mode, but a little lacking in the sublime.

    Aravis

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    #186102   2008-05-21 10:24 GMT      
    I loved it......

    DarkThinkeR

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    #186103   2008-05-21 10:33 GMT      
    No EWD in this one!

    VanGoghsEar

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    #186104   2008-05-21 11:05 GMT      
    Yeah medication! Yeah doctors! Yeah poetry! Yeah ya never flew over the cuckoo's nest!
    Yeah!
    I'm finished now.

    DarkThinkeR

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    #186105   2008-05-21 11:32 GMT      
    AYE, AYE, Cap'n ...........


    Sometimes work never seems to get CLOSE to being done....

    FollowTheLights

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    #186106   2008-05-21 13:08 GMT      
    Work is a four letter word.

    Nicki

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    #186107   2008-05-21 13:08 GMT      
    I likes it fine if I can begs a question. Is you is or is you ain't more none depressed than you was tomorrow?

    NoName

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    #186108   2008-05-21 14:12 GMT      
    I shall forever regret the 23 seconds torn from my life in the course of reading this.
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