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    #186095   2008-05-21 10:21 GMT      
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    Wen’day
    by TD Euwaite

    Whatcha’ doin?
    “Nuttin.”
    How come?
    “Bort.”
    Wanna’ go t’ d’ liberry?
    “K.”

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    #186096   2008-05-21 10:27 GMT      
    Went yesterday, got "The Golden Bough" by Frazer. Today, I read at home.

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    #186097   2008-05-21 11:39 GMT      
    I gits a feelin' dat yer cerikturs go ta dat dar liberry, but fergit ta chick out dim dar books.

    very cute poem.

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    #186098   2008-05-21 11:42 GMT      
    Ya know, you have an undoubted knack for dialogue!
    This is the way kids talk...got it down pat. And your other 'dialogue' poems too....have you written short stories or/and a book?
    You should...you have great talent in that direction.
    Your poetry is a 'given' good...take a chance and branch! I'd like to see it.
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