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Candylover
377 posts |
#186303 2008-05-20 14:27 GMT |
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of my acrostic nonet?
WORDS BEGIN Tell me now the truth I cannot see, Reveal your deep hidden secrets. Under your smile, I'm captive. Seal the letter you wrote, Torment me no more. Listen to me; On this night Vision Ends. |
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LostIsland
363 posts |
#186304 2008-05-20 14:37 GMT |
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Very good. Poem about ur b/f eh ?
Do u like mine ? http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AhMURqdUp20mkdrMo9CrTHjsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20080520112149AAPrlDC |
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SugarRush
387 posts |
#186305 2008-05-20 14:40 GMT |
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?o yes. sry.
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LuckOfTheIrish
396 posts |
#186306 2008-05-20 14:42 GMT |
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when i first read your question...
i saw... Are you beloved yet? i took a double take... and then realized the words... "Tell me now the truth I cannot see." |
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DarkDesire
350 posts |
#186307 2008-05-20 14:49 GMT |
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I am never bored of your work! This one is very beautiful...we should all "trust love"
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RainDrop
348 posts |
#186308 2008-05-20 15:00 GMT |
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I am never bored by your works. I can feel the anguish in the poem and would hope the outcome is satisfying. But, I have a hunch, it isn't ...
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Jules
353 posts |
#186309 2008-05-20 15:27 GMT |
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Yessum, but not by you.
Beautifully done. |
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WyleCoyote
352 posts |
#186310 2008-05-20 15:27 GMT |
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Bored? Nah, not yet. Keep up the good work.
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ChickenLicken
366 posts |
#186311 2008-05-20 15:32 GMT |
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Break time...this is my favorite from today, all poets.
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Illusion
373 posts |
#186312 2008-05-20 16:04 GMT |
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yet once more
obeying idiocy you utter words of indifference when you know the opposite is true no one can really hate complacency there is truth for you ahahahaha Wow those are hared than they look..I think this is a sweet poem |
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FieldsOfGold
339 posts |
#186313 2008-05-20 17:03 GMT |
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I am amazed and, I am ashamed to say, envious of your prowess. You have an astonishing way with words and images and forms. I could never get bored with your work, and always look forward to reading a new one. I am always impressed and moved by them. Thank you.
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FreeSpirit
380 posts |
#186314 2008-05-20 17:12 GMT |
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Who could ever get bored of such graceful beauty?
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FeralFeline
359 posts |
#186315 2008-05-20 17:14 GMT |
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Beautiful Nonet, expertly done.
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S4m80
373 posts |
#186316 2008-05-20 17:33 GMT |
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I like It very much.
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Windows
369 posts |
#186317 2008-05-20 18:27 GMT |
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I will never be board of your work. How could you think such a thing. This is what I come here fore, to read others works and hope that they will read mine. Yours are some of my favorite because, when I read them, I always connect deeper than most. Will you never stop drawing me in...?
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OutOfSpace
359 posts |
#186318 2008-05-20 19:11 GMT |
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I AM a board... oh, bored. I just assumed from the previous answer that you were talking about planks of wood!
I highly admire your skill from afar. This takes work girl! |
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GoldenNature
383 posts |
#186319 2008-05-20 22:29 GMT |
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Quoth the raving, "Never bored."
***** |
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Dinosaur
372 posts |
#186320 2008-05-21 11:52 GMT |
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i am bored if you are.
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