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ToxicSkull
385 posts |
#75109 2007-12-17 14:54 GMT |
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mommy
I don't want to go today My tummy aches, don't want to play I don't want to go to school No going outside, I know the rule I'm scared to death, I'll just play ill I don't care, I'll take the pill I don't want to ever go back I am to young for a heart attack Why can't you see I can't go back I don't want any books to stack That man he's always touching me Can't you even try to see He's hurting me won't leave me alone Locked in a room with no telephone Mommy won't you believe I'm your son, your little Steve I can't go back it hurts too much I don't want him, I hate his touch Please someone, I'm just a child Didn't you even notice, I never even smiled. This is written from the perspective of a five year old. It is what happened to me at Five. I tried to write like a 5 year old would. |
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Highclimber
366 posts |
#75110 2007-12-17 14:58 GMT |
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makes eme angry
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YummyCherry
347 posts |
#75111 2007-12-17 15:02 GMT |
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makes me want to kill the S.O.B that did that to you
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RebeliousFisher
319 posts |
#75112 2007-12-17 15:15 GMT |
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Makes me want to cry. Anyone who can do that to a child, and Live with themselves, is just horrible. It happens though, all the time. And it shouldn't. It shouldn't have happened to you.
But when no one believes the child, what can the child do? |
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AllSeeing
393 posts |
#75113 2007-12-17 15:15 GMT |
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that's horrible! (not the poem, just the subject matter)
i hope that all got resolved and the person who molested you was brought to justice. |
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KittyInCollinder
382 posts |
#75114 2007-12-17 15:15 GMT |
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That's such an.. eye opening poem. It makes me think alot.
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SymphonyOfSound
385 posts |
#75115 2007-12-17 15:32 GMT |
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awwwwwww Sweety that is so incredibly sad don't worry i'm here for you ok...
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TeeOff
375 posts |
#75116 2007-12-17 15:34 GMT |
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This is so heart wrenching that it knocks me to my knees to read it ' and so unbelievable that another human could do this to another' let alone a child' a poor sweet innocent boy of five.I know this horror and pain what this vile putrid bastar#did to you' and i hate him 'just as you hate him and Baby; i wish i could of gotten my hands on him for you...I am so sorry that you have to live' and relive this in your mind' and soul ; everyday.People like that should be shot dead on the spot'..Baby i am so sorry you had your childhood yanked right from ' under your feet' it wasn;t fair...I Love You Baby and i am' and all will be; here for you.....Shelly
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SeaHorse
362 posts |
#75117 2007-12-17 15:55 GMT |
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This is the subject matter that made me show my poetry to the world and start publishing. Child abuse, not to me, but to others. To try to give a voice to the thousands of innocent victims like yourself, who can't release the pain and anger that is held inside. At least you have the talent to do this yourself, and maybe you can also help others who have been through the same thing, face what has been done so they can go on with their life and not let it destroy them. I hope you have managed to do this also, and I hope this piece of human garbage that did this to you has been caught and placed in a jail cell with someone who will show him the error of his ways. Thank you for sharing, I think it was very hard for you to share this, and it evokes very angry, hostile feelings in an otherwise peaceful person. Not for you, for evil that happens to innocents. It is a good poem.
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HitTheSlopes
374 posts |
#75118 2007-12-17 17:16 GMT |
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the peom is great but if that happenned to you im sorry thats horrible but your poem is amzing also its amazing something so buetiful can come out of something so horrible
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WyleCoyote
352 posts |
#75119 2007-12-17 20:08 GMT |
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So you were fondled by somebody? Why would you tell everybody that in a Yahoo forum?
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BlossomTree
373 posts |
#75120 2007-12-18 00:55 GMT |
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Fear and pain in every line. Very much a well written perspective of a 5 year old living this nightmare.
I am sorry you had to go through this, and really, sorry isn't enough, there isn't enough. |
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Windows
369 posts |
#75121 2007-12-18 12:12 GMT |
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he should go to jail,, what he did was completly wrong!! I'm srry for you,, and i love your poem.. its good.
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